This week we started working with our writing partners. Our partners help us become better authors by reading over our work, telling us what they like, and giving suggestions on what we can improve. This week we focused on helping each other with checking if our story flowed, if it made sense, if we had capital letters, and if we used punctuation. This small moment story got all of Team Ronzio's attention! Everyone is curious what will be more exciting...the birthday...or horse riding lessons...
Our compliments to this author: 1) We liked how they used a talking lead to got our attention. 2) This author was brave and included dialogue as details. 3) We want to read more about the birthday and horse lessons! The BOLD beginning below BLEW Team Ronzio's mind! What a great use of setting details and sound to grab the reader's attention.
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